Opinion on business ad

[BanginGMC 23]

Hey guys,

I'm looking for feedback on this ad, honest feedback please..

what would you think if you were looking for a company in this line of work?

would you call me?

what should be changed?

what is your first thoughts?

anything is helpfull!!!

Professional Turf Installer From Football Fields to Frontyards

Edited May 4, 2010 by BanginGMC

[dvalue 17]

"do too"

due to

[BanginGMC 23]

"do too"

due to

thanks! other then that.. what do you think?

[ssh 924]

No job is too small OR too larger

change to large.

everything else looks good

[BanginGMC 23]

No job is too small OR too larger

change to large.

everything else looks good

Damn hah i must of skimmed this thing a million times and didnt notice mistakes thank you

[Kanaworm$ 292]

No job is too small OR too larger

change to large.

everything else looks good

Damn hah i must of skimmed this thing a million times and didnt notice mistakes thank you

Looks good man if all the changes above are corrected. Always good to get 2-3 people to proof read things like this for you.

Good Luck!

Found one - professionalized should be I professionalize

Edited May 4, 2010 by OldSkool_08

[BanginGMC 23]

Yes, i've changed everything but it takes a few min for the changes to be corrected.

thank you for pointing that one out!

Edited May 4, 2010 by BanginGMC